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He inherited this giant villa from an elderly millionaire. This lady was like a grandmother to him. This women went through a miserable childhood with six siblings. She became millionaire through her husband. The night when our lady met her future husband was a miserable rainy cold night. After finding her boyfriend cheating on her she was sitting on a bench at the railway station waiting for the first train back to Vienna when a tall and handsome man in a nice suit offered her his jacket. They talked all night through and got married soon. This was the moment when she met the frugal millionaire mindset by marring a man whose family owned property investments in Vienna. The lady never wanted to have an own child, because she thought that having children cost a lot of money. Even though, this lady never experienced motherhood she looked at Gavrilo as her own grandson, she helped him to learn German and gave him not only salary, but left him the villa
in her will.

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He inherited the giant villa from an elderly millionaire who was like a mother to him. She had a miserable childhood and six siblings, but ended up marring a wealthy man whose family owned property investments in Vienna. She met her future husband on a cold rainy night, after finding out that her boyfriend had been cheating on her. She had been sitting on a bench at the railway station, waiting for the first train back to Vienna when a handsome tall man in a nice suit offered her his jacket. They talked all night and got married within a short time. He was the one who introduced her to the frugal millionaire mindset. She never wanted to have children, because she thought that having children cost a lot of money. Even though she never became a mother, later on in her life when she met Gavrilo, she looked at him as her own grandson. She helped him learn German, gave him a salary, and in the end left him the villa in her will.